All Comments on 'The Empath Cycle: 1949 In The Beginning'

was this reposted by the original author?

And no wonder: your story progresses at such a glacial pace, I knew before I reached the bottom of Page 1 that it was going to be incredibly long. I probably wouldn't have guessed 24-fucking-pages, but only because I don't expect ANYONE to submit a 24-page story. You really should have broken this up into chapters of four to five pages and staggered their release dates to at least a day or more apart. If I was to try to read this whole story in one sitting, my ass would fall asleep!

in my opinion you should have broken this one up into 4 parts of 6 pages each, 24 pages is a bit too much to sit and read all at once

Never mind any negative comments, this is a wonderful story, I was disappointed when it ended at 24 pages, I could have read a book full of it. Many many thanks for posting and writing .

It read like 8 and i needed more. By far the best story i've ever read on this site. Please Angel, give us another. Thank you.

I remember reading this (at least the first few pages) some time ago. Is this a reposting? Is this a continuation or extension or...?

This is a novel. I published a first version some time ago and reworked it since.

As of today, there are 6 novels and a novella in The Empath Cycle.

I am working on two more novellas and a novel. My life is a bit hectic at the moment, but I'll get back to them soon.

Sorry the format isn't followed in publishing.

PS: If you can't read it all at once, do what I alwas do, copy and paste it in a program on your computer to read at your leisure. I hate doing it chapter by chapter which is why I posted the stories as an integral text.

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