Swipe to see who's online now!
- Gay Male
- The Enchanted Boy Ch. 02
- Comments
All Comments on 'The Enchanted Boy Ch. 02'
by martin_x59
Sort by:
- 1 Comment
Anonymousover 12 years agoGood start
A good start for a story, but have you looked into getting an editor at all? Proper grammar and spelling helps with reading comprehension. Also, you should try to flesh out your stories more as each of your chapters seems rather short.
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
martin_x59@martin_x59479 Followers
Swipe to see more cams!
READ MORE OF THIS SERIES
The Enchanted Boy Ch. 03 Next Part
The Enchanted Boy Ch. 01 Previous Part
The Enchanted Boy Series Info
SIMILAR Stories
Timber Pack Chronicles Ch. 01
4.8
806
125
Inside of You
4.76
512
71
Two of a Kind
4.75
66
14
The Divide
4.79
183
27
Bonds Unbroken
More Stories4.55
98
24
