by martin_x59
A satisfying end to a satisfying story. At times it got a bit confusing but it was never boring. I liked the pacing of the story and the characters in it. All around, a very good story.
I have to agree with everything avidreader said. Justice came to those who deserved it lol
An amazing story !! I had soo much fun reading it - lots of adventure, lots of pretty boys and A LOT of sizzling hot sex - just the way I like it !
You're a master storyteller - I have loved all your work. Perhaps u should see about the typos and the spelling and grammatical mistakes - but that did not take away my pleasure in reading this fantastic story !! Do carry on writing, don't ever give up - you're a natural, honestly !
Thanks so much for your effort ! :)
That was A-FUCKING-MAZING i personly think it is one of the best and fuck the shitheads that hate you .You ROCK and give me(a young author who has creativity just not a muse) #KEEPWRITING4LIFE
too wonderful...... adventure + sex + love + happy ending ........ never bettter..keep up!!!!!!! u rock man