All Comments on 'The End of Virginity'

But equally well done

But I notice that, like in your last story, the

mother performs oral sex on the son, & then they

talk about having full intercourse NEXT TIME. Unless

you're planning on writing sequels, have them go

all the way in the first story.

i think it`s a good story and hope you write more!

You did a great job with this story. The tempo and descriptions make the tale easier to get into. I could feel her hand on my dick. I was stroking my hardon throughout. Thanks for the pleasure.

The title lured me in. When I realized it was mother-son incest, I thought: same old thing. But it was so nicely done, so erotically written, I really enjoyed it. Because I'm a fetishist, I wanted to know a few more details about the mom's underwear, but that's just me.

was arousing but not much enjoyed... should be hardcore.

Looking forward to part two.

...double their money back. Most can't even write a comment worth reading so they certainly can't write a decent story

hot story don't listen to that last comment you did good

This is an excellent story of hot son into mother sex. The highly talented author was about the same age as his hero in the tale, 19 years old. It's a great pity we haven't had more such stories from this gifted young writer. Maybe it's 'cause he's turned from thinking about it to actually doing it? Has Mr. Ledier been blowing his hot young balls up his mother's mommy-cunt all this time? All his many fans sure hope so! Some commenters have complained that the author doesn't go through to complete rampant motherfucking. But once a mom has given her boy a nice firm handjob, followed by a satisfying blowjob it's clear the next step is for the boy to shove his big stiff prick right up his mother's wet cunt and give his mommy the best gift any son can ever give his dear mother---a twatful of his rich creamy semen straight from his brimming balls. Kudos, Mr. Ledier, I trust your fine fat young prick was hard as you wrote this story, just as you've given your grateful readers nice big hard ons!

Like your previous story, you started out very hot with the mother sucking off the son but left the reader hanging. Seeing as you've not done anything since 2006, we'll simply keep hanging.

this was a bullshit story.

Your story just end when mom going to bathroom??whtas wrong with fuck each other???just bj and what???

you must have a hangup, you never went further with your story, you have a good start keep it going

Another 'cock tease' author. This site should delete these or put them in another category