by seksie
Your story was great. Keep it going. My wife loved it too. Got her all wet and ready for action immediately. She wants to request you add a little forced gang bang action and possibly some forced bi female into it also. Keep up the great writing.
Great first story. Got me hard just reading it. Can't wait for the blindfold chapter......
This story was well written and even a bit arousing but I'm sorry, I didn't enjoy it. It's just a typical 'cookie-cutter non-consent story... it lacks imagination.
Good start, keep it going make it dirtier would the other teachers give her better marks too?
keep it going great start
It got the job done. And by that I mean It was a non-consent story. And it was too short. She was too willing to do whatever he wanted and it didn't seem believable. Also, think about words that people would ACTUALLY say, not just things that we think are hot and sexy. Because when I read, "Oh, baby, I wanna stick my hot throbbing cock into your delicious pussy!" I think... no one would actually say that!!!
Not bad. Not great. I hope you take my suggestions as constructive, not degrading. Keep writing.