All Comments on 'The Erotic Bible: Adam and Eve'

this absolutely has to be one of the most imaginative and best written tales i've ever read. The sex scenes were interwoven perfectly. a fan always.

This is one hell of a story. I bow to the imagination that could take such a subject and weave a very erotic and hugely readable story out of it. You have talent, long may you use it.

An excellent beginning - I'd love to see it continue!

Adam and Eve did not have navels.

Why oh why does 'Anonymous in the USA' have to be such a pedantic Prat? So Adam and Eve didn't have navals - big deal. They didn't have daughters either but Cain married somebody!

Just enjoy a well written imaginative story and stop nit picking.

I assume "Anonymous in the USA" is subscribing to the Creationist philosophy that since A and E were created rather than born, there was no need for navels. However, nowhere in the Bible does it state that A and E did not have navels. Secondly, why couldn't God have put them on for decoration?

On the other hand, A in the USA gave the story a 100; if that's the only complaint, I'm happy. Thanks to all of you!

This Story was very well written and it keep me interested all though the story I wished it was longer though I really enjoyed it.

This has to be one of the best and most imaginative stories I have ever read.I love it!

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Juicy!

Wonderfully written with excellent imagery and detail that sensuously draw the reader into Secret's story as easily as Eve hungrily sucks Adam's penis into her salivating mouth, and like the forbidden fruit, delighting in its taste and texture while unleashing her overwhelming desire to erotically please Adam, savoring and devouring his fruit of her exquisitely performed labor, wantonly sucking, licking,and tasting every delicious spurt that anoints and saturates Eve's tongue and fills her mouth and swallowing throat, enveloping Adam and Eve in the joy of mutual sexual intimacy and ecstasy.