All Comments on 'The Escape Room - Room 04: Hannah'

Yes please write a fifth chapter about what happens to Drake and his friends after they move into their new apartment, starting with the dinner with Ashley their landlord.

PLEASE!!

One hell of a ride. Please continue

Room 5 would be great, maybe add the Ashley! Body enhancement also.

Great story, and it would be great to see more of Crazy Merlin or Drake or the girls

Been checking everyday for room 4! A good read! Thank You!

yes more please

Would absolutely love to see more chapters about all the characters.

i love it.. more more

Just fantastic. More more more.

Would love to see more of drake and the girls, maybe a one-shot with ashley as well if you want! Great job on them all!

I wanna see how CM repays him

I would love to see this series continue

More rooms and more women but don't forget about Crazy Merlin. Drake should get Ashley and a new ranch in the country for all the new ponies.

More would be wonderful. I agree that I'm curious about CM's repayment as well, but mostly more of the mind control harem theme would've the best! Perhaps Drake exploring his Dom role more? Delving into BDSM perhaps?

Point is, bloody good job! Keep it coming if you can!

More plzFC

Would like to see how CM’s gift could be used in the real world and not just in the rooms. Maybe CM’s gift was programmed into him and he also has the power to convert/hypnotise at will, temporarily or permanently.

Wonderful series, not ready for it to end!

I gave it 5 stars and would like to read more of what happen's between the 4 Girl's and any add-on's they make. And would also like to read Room #5 I think you could make a long series of this Story. with all of the way's it could turn out. Like ex Guy friends of the Ladies wondering why him instead of Me. or Girl Friends wondering what made their friend go for a Nobody in their terms.

I really enjoyed your story. The quality of writing was something that kept me wanting for more every time. Please do another installment to the storyline. Thank you.

I've really enjoyed this series, but if I've one complaint its that while we get glimpses we never really get inside the girls heads as they succumb.

Maybe Chapter 5 should be Hannah's story totally from her POV detailing her descent. That for me is whats horny, its not so much the end product but how that person is twisted & moulded to that end product.

If there's no more then we're left with a very well written 4 part story & I'd be happy as a fan with that. If I'm being greedy then a Girls POV chapter would add the final gloss to an excellent series

great chapter

can't wait for the next one.

mayby follow ashleys enslavement?

Thank you for this - really enjoyed it. Love crazy merlin, would definitely enjoy more stories involving him.

Absolutely fantastic! You're on of the best writers on literotica, that's for sure!

Basically all the comments so far demands more chapters, and I'm sure everyone will love another chapter in the series. Maybe a bonus or a sequel chapter about crazy merlin or his repayment for Drake. Love the stories, keep em coming

Good stuff, would love to read more. also curious about Crazy Marlins repayment

Awesome series keep it going

Well done. Would love a chapter 5. You've sold me, you're one of my favorite authors now.

Great story with fantastic writing! Would love more

nice story and worth the read

Great series, great concept, and very well done. Didn't try to do too much or go on too long - each story was just the right length. This last story was the best of the bunch, by a little bit. I like how it's implied the girls can be something other than mindless bimbos if they need to be. Another story - an epilogue, maybe - would be great. What happened with the agent, how awkward was Drake, really?, etc. Anyway. Great job!

I'd love to see chapter 5, 6, 7.............. Well, you know what I mean!

mind control story plus good sex scenes. I applaud the author for dealing with one question often ignored in these tales; how does an otherwise untalented young man and his harem of sex slaves make a living post transformation. There might be a sequel in exploring how Hannah, in her private life an obedient sex slave, obtains her promotion to Director of Operations.

One quibble: doesn't the down payment of $1,000.00 a sex slave seem ridiculously small?

I would read any of these you choose to do

I have really enjoyed all of the Escape Room chapters you have put out here and would love for it to continue with a chapter 5 about Ashley.

Really enjoyed the story. Keep it up.

Great little series. Well written.

Another brilliant series! Would love to see more from the gang and what they get up to! Chapter 5 is a must!

I have thoughts as to the reward for Drake's generosity from CM. But since it's your story you either know or could think it it up. Will you do that? Write a chapter detailing the reward? Or even a history of CM?

thank you, part 5 please

Interested to see what's the difference between Drake and the others who didn't share, plus get to know how they balance personal-professional, and future plans

Would love a chapter 5; or even just more stories from you at all!

Yes. Go. Do it. Now...........Please.

I liked all of your escape rooms. They keep a steady pace and you're elicit scenes are well crafted. I'd like to see more of your work soon.

I would definitely enjoy reading another story with the Escape Room. Kinda curious to see how things turn out with Ashley.

Wow, this series is just incredible! Thanks a lot! I hope this will continue... ;-)

This series is amazing! I would love to read more, definitely going through your other works next. I would like to read more about both Dave and CM, if you don't mind!

In old fairy tales and myths when an old wizard was shown kindness and generosity he would show his true self and leave a boon or gift to the generous person. I would like to find out what CM left Drake. Maybe a penis as big or bigger than CM's that never gets sore or tired?

For your next chapter, whatever you decide to write. Will you keep the old guy involved? Expand on their new lives? Add additional women and make them submissive or just a side story?

Thanks for a good read...

i’ve been loving this series and i would definitely read #5. i also enjoy the other evolve series that you did. i’m assuming the wizard is the same guy?

Would definitely enjoy reading more about this crew and their exploits. 👍🙏👍

Great story. I vote for a number 5.

SO what happens to Drake & CM?

Thank you for sharing another great store ... look farward to reading more of your work ... wish you and your family/friends well

Nicely done, extremely hot and I love the way it progressed throughout.

I also vote for a #5!!

You've written a great series! Would enjoy reading as many more as you'd want to write.

Please please keep writing!! I loveing all of you're storeys

Really enjoyed this series, and I liked the concept which gave it structure.

I'd love to see more. The escape room conditioning idea could be a good vehicle for a revenge type scenario. Inquisitive former co-worker? Nosy journalist?

Thanks!

I really liked this series and yes, a next part or more would be welcome.

what happened to the five? Interesting and great that they can work and pay the bills - where to book Merlin? ;-)

Would like to see you explore more on the story line it was good reading thanks (-:

If you have enough for an epilogue, that would be lovely!

Liked this a lot. Great premise, fun scenarios and very hot action. I would love to read more and find out what happens to everyone.

I really liked this story and I would love to read more about the characters in a 5th part.

I really like the story! My feminine side would enjoy a reverse harem version of this story ;p

This has been a great series. I have to admit this room was a little bit of a let down though. The premise of the final room simply being, you hypnotize her, felt a bit boring to me. I was expecting something like, try to ride a sybian without cumming for 30 minutes. Or something like that. I do like the tease of the land lady being seduced in though.

I am a big fan of the whole hypnosis literati a genre and besides how frustratingly hot these stories were, they were written very well and had me craving more. 10 out of 10

Yes please, a fifth chapter would be would be really good.

just do it. can't wait to read it

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Looking forward to Room 5!

Room 5 could be fun!

I love this series and I'd love a 5th chapter!

Love to see what special gift CM gave Drake for being so generous with his playthings. Is this CM the same Uber driver from Trance series?

Please write a fifth chapter! Would love to see what happens with this group - how the girls talk up Drake to Ashley, what gift the CM gives him, how the girls control their horniness in public. Truly fantastic work.

I'd like to see a "room 5"

55555sssssss all day long, hey, what about CM's promises??? That was mentioned 2 to 3 times.......I wished I had an Uncle Merlin....

mr bill

This is an absolutely great series! A background/prologue of CM or an epilogue series of this one seems like they have a ton of potential. This is great and really seems like it has potential for expansion if the mood strikes you. Thanks so much, really enjoyed it.

PLEASE write that 5th story!

I think a fifth story in the series would be awesome!! I would like to find out a little more about what happens next. Please, I know it's been three years since you wrote the fourth story,but it's just to good to not have a great fifth to it. PLEASE for the masses who have written there reviews it would be a tragedy of biblical proportions to not write a 5th story too this epic masterpiece!!! I'm down on my knees with my hands grasped together in utter reverence, I humbly and sincerely beg you to write this story. Your humble servant Souperkev1!!!!!

I also think ashleys story needs to be told -- 4 hot bimbo slaves one dominant master how can the sexy landlord escape from their room :)

Absolutely loved these chapters and crave many more! You have become my new favorite author since I discovered you about a week ago. Really get into your stories! Thank you from my dark and kinky heart!

I think it would be great if now HE got hypnotized into a horny slave. Soooo hot

what about room 05: drake? when will you release it?

Please write #5! I'd love to hear about how they are doing. Are the girls able to function without him?

This was so well written and I really enjoyed this series!

Please continue this series!!!!

Maybe, in story 5, Drake could find that CM lives in the same building. He could be invited to dinner, to meet Ashley too...

That was a great series. Now I have to re-read it and figure out how it connects to TRANCE, BBA, etc., because I feel it very much does fit into that cannon.

Always room for more!

An exceptional story, very well thought out and written with great characters and plot and of course sex scenes. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. More of these characters please. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I enjoy your stories and would enjoy reading more along this story line.

Thank you

Great story! P.S. Part 5 would be great, I love 'where they are now' stories. Plus, what exactly was that generosity that 'Crazy Merlin' talking about. Is it permeant or temporary, does it work on every woman or just the ones he wants.

Excellent story! Keeps you interested. Nice variety of activities with each of the ladies. I agree that further chapters in this story would be great. But there are so many other options as well. Maybe a CM origin story? His other escapades, or other clients? Maybe even an opposite to the reward side? Someone who tries to take advantage of CM and is . . . Dealt with?

So many choices. Options and opportunities.

awesome series

Part 5 - since he was so nice to offer participation, he was given a special serum/object/ect to use to add to his harem

Definitely worth a 5th part - otherwise you've just left the story hanging.

Great story, I am thankful it is not 2018 and that I did not have to wait for the subsequent chapters.

very fun and creative story. Would love to see a continuation.