All Comments on 'The Essay'

I enjoy all of your stories and how they are written. Hope you come back and write more!

I like how you destinguished from reading the story and actual dialog between them. Well down!

As a posted story, it seemed to lack a lot. I think it would have been better if reconstructed to be the actual chain of events. As it is, the reader only gets snippets of the history behind it all, and what we have presented is a skeleton of what has happened, without having any significant information about what caused any of it.