All Comments on 'The Evil of Hammond House Ch. 4'

It would have been way more believable if she suddenly didn't decide to have the baby. I don't know anyone, no matter how mentally stable they are, who would cope well with seeing their friends murdered, and then agree to be impregnated by Dr. Hammond. Suspension of disbelief? A little too far-fetched for me.

Now here is where i have to start being negative:( I think that well it is written quite well....i dont think she would have agreed so easily...if you had made her struggle a bit more it would have been perfect(i know that sounded like a raist lol but it was unintended). Unless you were goign for the fact that she knew she ahd no way of getting away and that she might as well not resist so it goes easier? either way good writing style and i now move o part 5!