All Comments on 'The Ex'

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Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 17 years ago
Wrong category

Probably better in BDSM or maybe fetish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More like this please!!!

Yes, this should have been in another category but this was a GREAT story. I'm glad I didn't miss it since I seldom read from the Loving Wives category. I would love to see this one continue ar perhaps more along this line. It took me 5 times of trying to finish this story, since I kept finishing first.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
her cunt

her cunt won't be tight long

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
power wife

very interesting and loved the writing and the story was loaded with dominant woman who wanted revenge and lots of sex and making her ex a slVE t times and lower

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It wasn’t well written

Keep practicing your grammar. With practice you will get it correct soon enough

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Crap!

Bad storyline. Poorly written.

calflashcalflashover 5 years ago
give up

give up writing and just go beat your meat. What a cuck story. Fantasies are just that an imaginary thing not reality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

god he is one dumb bastard why would he want a slut like that get the hell home and stay away from the slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yeah, NO.

This started out with some potential. I just don't see the woman in the course of 6 months, figuring out she liked kink, and she liked doing 5 or 6 guys. And let's not forget about the risk of STDs. I'm mean she's fucking multiple guys, one who's 20 something and probably screwing lots of other girls.

The guy in this story is getting way more than he expected. I'm really surprised he didn't say thanks, no thanks.

No real character development here either. I would have thought she'd have taken a little more time to get him into the bedroom when he came over.

62276227about 3 years ago
I'm calling Bullshit

Started out good, but her calling another lover blew it all to hell. Could've been a good story if she'd kept it between them...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"...fucks like a mule." Dumbass, a mule is STERILE!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Szkoda ze nie mozna ocenic jak -1

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