All Comments on 'The Exchange - Dark Gods'

I really enjoyed all aspects of your well written tale, it easily held my attention and I thought the content and character depth was excellent. More of the same please!

I LOVED YOUR STORY! I HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE MAYBE WRITE ABOUT HOW SHE WANTS TO BE WITH THE GUY AGAIN, BUT SHE HAS TO DO SOMETHING IN ORDER TO BE WITH HIM AGAIN.

I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY!

Hi,this was recommended as being similar to one of mine, so I took the trouble to read. I feel pride that my own, although completely different in theme, should be compared to your own excellent writing. Well done I loved it.

This was more sweet than sexy <3 Shanareal was pretty much the embodiment of most male heroes in fiction these days, except he was a bad guy, which made me love him more. I wish you had picked a different name than Jessica, maybe Grace or Lila. It's just a suggestion though, not at all necessary, and regardless of the girl's name, I loved the story :) Also, the ending, or epilogue, was a bit rushed. It feels like you were tired of writing it by that time so you just summed up the plot instead. If you ever decide to come back to this story and edit, I feel you could afford to draw it out much more, in fact, it could make for a pretty hot book! Keep writing, and thank you for sharing ^^

Haunting.