by Bootfrau
That story was awesome. I couldn't stop reading it. I do hope you write more!!
The minute she tries to walk him out, create a fuss and she's in jail and the rest of this stupid story doesn't happen. Total baloney.
I really liked this story. I love detailed femdom and you had it. Thank you!!
Incredible femdom. Miles above almost everything I've ever read in this category.
Wow. What an imaginative piece. And great writing and structure. I'd love to ask some questions... ;)
The grammar is fine, the spelling mostly correct and the writing quality is above average.
The storyline, however, I’m afraid to say is not appealing. It’s not erotic, not exciting, just a continuous round of homosexual acts, sadism, cruelty and misandry with some psychobabble about justification.