All Comments on 'The Exile's Path Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not bad.

It was a good read but you need to watch to make sure that you are not leaving words out of the sentences. You had that happen a few times. So I wanted to give you a heads up.

KryptileKryptilealmost 6 years ago
Great new character

I love the female dwarf. And I find the shallow sea fucking between Tula and Reld very hot!

A_StoneA_Stonealmost 6 years ago
Love as always

I like these characters. I’m interested in how this story progresses 🙃

Agranger2343Agranger2343almost 6 years ago
Amazing

Can't wait to see how all these pans out!!!!!love this story

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I write erotic fiction, mostly fantasy, and draw erotic art, also mostly fantasy. I welcome constructive feedback and I'm usually up to chat - send me an email or message me on my blog. Thanks for reading! You can read chapters early and see art and maps on my blog at https:...

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