All Comments on 'The Express Train'

Thank you for a well-written, sizzling story, LadyAlana. The way you show Alana's desire for Angela is both elegant and very much evocative of her dominant nature. I hope to read more of your work.

I loved this. It's descriptive, almost punishing use of words really worked for me.

I must say though, I don't think I could travel on a train wearing a corset, phew, how uncomfortable would that be?

These types of clothing are definitely designed for short spells in the boudoir or at a party. (wink, wink)

Anyways anyone who can use the words such as "BUCOLIC" gets a five from me 💓

if only my train journeys were this good , I would go on them more.

Great description of a sexy encounter.

This was an amazingly good first submission. Write more and soon.

Loved this story. It's well written and sexy. It was great to read something that so clearly displayed consent and respect.