All Comments on 'The Extended Family Ch. 03'

Can't wait for the next installment. Very real and believable inner feelings expressed by all. Keep it up!

Very good blend of intrigue, passion and character development. Your writing style drew me into the characters in such a way that blurred the line between reality and fantasy. I could know someone like this (or be them if fate kindly smiled on me). Stories like yours are why I am an avid reader of Lit....BRAVO

Just perfect expect for one error in which you talk about Karen and then changed her name to Lynn (Lynn beamed in the compliment). Other than that, the voice, the narrator is just wonderful. I really like this protagonist and feel a bond with him. I feel privilge to be a part of this converstation.

and better!! 5 stars!

Love the story, very well written. Just wondering if Karen is on birth control? No mention of birth control makes it very interesting of what might happen!!!