All Comments on 'The Extended Family Ch. 04'

What an entertaining and sexual story. Loved the use of the husband, added tension and excitment, not the sexual kind.haha Very well written. Deminsional characters, great love scenes, wonderful sex scenes. Thought that the "understanding" that the women came to was a little contrived. But, when you think about it, women do understand each other instantly. I can't wait for Mel to arrive and join in the sexual gymnastics. I do think you spent a bit much time on his need for the "pills". Being an older man, your images were enough to get me hard and stroking. And enough length to your stories for me to be able to enjoy a long and pleasing stroking. Can't wait for the next chapter to get me off. Thanks. Richard

You changed jim's last name hmmm?

Thus far, the series has been an enjoyable, romantic romp. However the essential groundwork has not been crafted nor presented in sufficient depth nor detail. Jim an Lyn's deep and soul-binding love needs far greater specificity and demonstration long before Karen is ever brought to the house. And Lyn's desire to expand the couple's relationship to include a third member needs solid background and buildup before springing it on Jim. Also, wouldn't Jim have to wrestle more strongly with his worry about damaging what has become a heaven-sent new love, the first since the death of his original love and life mate. We need to hear about how he is brought to accept a second woman to share the love, and how Lyn helps him understand that it is not only ok, but also a loving, desirable and needed addition to the glorious core that Jim and Lyn have built. These are some of my thoughts. Enough for now.