All Comments on 'The Extended Family Ch. 14'

A well written, wonderful story. I still think there is more of the story to tell but your the writer.

I'd like to see you come back at another time and pick up where everyone has moved to Sarasota with Mel married and enjoying another special adventure.

Fantastic story writing!!! I'm just sad you ran out of hollidays.

Surely you can't finish it here. Ther are a lot of weays this could continue, such as Lynn or Karen gettinmg pregnant, Bev moving to Sarasota etc. However it waas a very good story

Thank you for sharing a great story well written. You even found an appropriate ending to this portion of the saga. However, is there ever really an end in a universe with a continuum?

Thanks for an entertaining read,

I'm sorry, like all others, that you ended this wunderful story.

You should at least have included a story about the reunion at Valentines day.

Thank you for writing this.

Billydee2 is EXACTLY right. More story, in the future. Best wishes. drmike

I read the entire story line from beginning to end today and all I can say is WOW. Beyond a doubt one of the finest I have found on this site in all the years I have been reading here. Thank You

The story could go on and on. Valentines day, Memorial Day... Arnold Palmer's birthday... and we get the picture. Well done Romantic 1. Well done! I am your fan.

A great story line...except you told it from the persepective of a female in a man's body...nothing wrong there. The sex scenes were great. This story could use a screen writer to make a movie with about four sequels. Wish I was a producer.

So easy to read and so thorough in content. You did not leave many ends untied, and yet took us on a long and enjoyable ride. Predictable? Maybe, but also enjoyable when our vicarious thoughts were fulfilled in word and deed. A great story, carefully crafted.

Thanks for a good ride.

As a story writer you are wonderful, the sex was good yet the intimate feelings we all share were exposed. How nice if we all could share that good feeling of love with everyone we know. I truly hope you can continue along this story as does all of your fans of which I am now one.

cowboy2kewl

Your stories have lead me to a new outlook on love and life. I would love to find as much love as is shown here. the sex would be a bonus. I have read all your posted stories here now and look forward to future writings Til later Ted Ted1955Whit@yahoo.com

You have written one incredible story. Wow! Thank you very much. -b

Have loved the series and eagerly look forward to more.

Spent most of the night reading your story non stop! Thank you for sharing it with us. Loved it!

and really, love all your stories. all 5 stars. i hope you still plan on writing - maybe even a new series!!