by texashorror
Despite that I quite enjoyed it.
Excellent lines such as : I stood there for a lifetime, pulling away in my futility. made this a worthwhile read.
I was also impressed that he knew Kelly had her eyes closed when she was shot, despite the narrator's eyes being closed at the time.
Short, nasty, funny.
It was good for being so short. Like the other comment, I don't see how he would know Kelly had her eyes closed when she was shot if his were closed, too. Kind of sick, but still a good story about how you can do just about anything with the threat of dying looming before you.