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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice one, except for the ending.

Liked this tale a lot - but the ending seemed screwed up to me: If the characters were NOT on civil or even friendly terms, I could not really imagine the innkeeper settling down and telling his life-story.

MongolSamuraiMongolSamuraiover 13 years agoAuthor
Ending fixed...

Thanks for the critique. It was a pretty half-assed ending, I wrote the whole thing in one night and I was getting tired and running out of creativity. I reviewed it, and re-wrote it to make more sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I want to settle down with the right woman, too!

Thank you for the heart-warming story. I don't know whether it's great literature, but it sure was enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

One word only.....

Beautiful.

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