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traci_eliotover 13 years agoVery nice indeed
I like this story, and particularly the historic details you work into each chapter, as well as the excitement of your imagination. It's nice to see a longer chapter and the whole thing is coming together well.
Thank you, Sovereign State - this gets 4 *s and a 'well done'.
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