All Comments on 'The Fall Pt. 02'

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Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

If Only

Would anyone please tell me where this tree stand was so that I might go and fall out of it? Please? Great story. 5 stars.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

More!

I am glad you decided to continue this series, I hope there are more to come :)

RichardG almost 7 years ago

Better than part 1

This was better than part 1 still great

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Yeah, Chapter 2!

Glad to see another chapter in this story. Hope you continue this series.

Sex4lf57 almost 7 years ago

I like the concept of the series so far. Hopefully the main character will figure out his "powers" in chapter three and learn to control them better. Right now he justs seems to be flailing about.

rightbank over 6 years ago

I hope he figures out how to regulate the influence he has

Right now it seems chaotic and without direction

linnear almost 5 years ago

Mysterious

I'm still trying to figure out what has helped to make him irresistible.

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