All Comments on 'The Family Camping Trip Ch. 04'

good story.

you ruined a good thing

I agree that you had a great story going but you ruined it with this chapter. You should have stayed with the family only. Instead you made Callie into a slut. You should have left it as it was but you had to go and ruin a great story!!!

How is Callie not a slut? She has a boyfriend that she was miserable about leaving solely for the reason that she won't be getting her pussy pounded the rest of the weekend, one car ride with her bother and it's "incest is best". She fucks her brother, her cousin, her father, next on the hit list is her uncle, but readers have an issue with her dominant uncle seducing her into fucking strangers on the side of the rode? Really?! I firmly believe the slut factor hit it's nexus at the campsite when fucked her father behind her mother's back, but whatever. Despite this rant I'm not complaining, as a matter of fact I clicked the "favorite" button because to me I had a raunchy good time reading it, I just wish the ladies could have gotten together and had some fun, hell had full out family time orgy at the campground, but that's just me.

this ending was a bit much as having callie let anyone into her really let me down and really ruined the intimacy she had with her family members that made the story hot if I were her I would be mad her uncle just invited anyone that happened to stop by to fuck her as even though she is on the pill she could still catch something

I have enjoyed every chapter you have written in the serious

Any more chapters to come

This is my favourit chapter!

Uncle Nick is a jerk. Letting random strangers do it is wrong.

I didn’t like chapter 4 as much as the first 3. I would have liked more family exploration, that’s hot to me.

This chapter was NOT enjoyable...Nick is a complete ASSHOLE, letting random strangers fuck his niece like that...he has no regard for her...

Makes me think that 'sexygirl76' has some serious issues in her own life; also, stories read the same...gotta move on...

**2** Stars...have not scored a story that low in a while....😨😣

Sorry, but you ruined it with the last chapter -- the uncle, and especially the threesome with the stranger was just too much -- plus unbelievable that the young Callie would engage in that.

He had her fuck multiple strangers unprotected 😬 Next story, "Sharing the clap with Daddy". Love the stories but I just couldn't get past that part. Uncle Nick is kind of a dick. Girl loses her virginity a couple weeks before the trip to a long time boyfriend and within a weekend fucked her brother, cousin, dad, 3 strange men, and her uncle. It's just very far fetched, hot as fuck(before the strangers bit) but far fetched

Should've Kept it amongst the children there was no need for the parents to have gotten involved