All Comments on 'The Family Ch. 08'

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tallblondeMtallblondeMalmost 8 years ago
Very hot story

I'm sorry I haven't voted on every chapter, they are all good. One thing though - there are grammatical/syntax issues which sometimes distract from the story. I strongly recommend you find an editor to proofread your submissions.

8letters8lettersalmost 6 years ago
I'm enjoying this story

I like whole family stories and this is an enjoyable one. I particularly liked this MFF chapter

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