All Comments on 'The Family Room Ch. 01'

Erin seems like a malicious gossip, i could see her making more trouble for them with Erin's brother Sam or without.

meanwhile, WILL sister Julie turn up preggers now, since her brother did not withdraw in time to stop everything? hmmm

great story so far, but erin and her brother will be a thorn in their sides. after all no woman likes to be turned down. but i like how the brother really likes his sisters natural look.

Unexpected depth, I liked the way Rick was attracted to his sister's natural look, too, and the way they wanted sex to have meaning, especially the 1st time. Please continue soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

It's starting to be a very good love story, I hope it continues. More detail in sex scenes please! other than that mmmmmmmmm.

Good build-up. Well written. Good details and descriptions, and then, when it was getting to the climax (no pun intended) the entire sex act is described as "we made love". Disappointing. Could have been a '5' with some description of the sex act, the dialogue during it.

This story stands on it's own, regardles of what the others may say. The tenderness of their love make it exceptional. OK, one thing...a 24 year old virgin? I believe there's a new movie about him.

If I may say, a very good, sweet, love story. I especially liked the way Rick and Julie were attracted one to the other and the way they wanted their 1st time sex to have real meaning. Despite the 'violence' with Erin and Sam (watch out for future trouble) this was a delightfully tender love story. Looking forward to more of the same quality!

I love the protective angle of the brother to sister and sister to brother...but will it get them in more trouble?

I hope you know that pre-ejaculate can make any woman pregnant if she's in her fertile perod just as easily as a full fledged cum can..

nice story. i am wondering now whether Julie did all that on purpose, that is sam almost raping her and erin raping rick..mm...

The best incest story i ever heard of.

whether its real or not still the writer is a legend full of detail and imagination - well the dirty one of course and creativity!

bravo!

If you really are liking this, try reading some of chargergirl's stories

This is really excellently written!

Chapter one was excellently written. Excellent character development/progression. Not boring at all. For your sake, the next chapter better be on the same level as this, if not better.

Forget the Neanderthal regarding 24 y/o virgin; I grew up in the 60s and 70s, I waited until I was 24 (in 1985) for just that reason. I didn't end-up with her, but I did it for myself, not anyone else.

There are still people around who have some class; few and far between, but a few

DKP

Yep, 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 what more can I say.

what a great first chapter. you really sucked me in. now on to the next chapters!!

Pretty good, I might have liked another page. They say always leave them wanting more, if that's you did well.

Another series for me to bury myself in, This was an amazing first chapter. Cant wait for them to discovet their feelings for each other properly and completely.

Erin and Sam both seem very dysfunctional, possibly psychotic. I'm not certain that they actually appear to the reader as you wanted to portray them. 4/5

Great chapter, well written with just enough drama between Erin throwing herself at Rick to Julie jumping her and claiming Rick as hers. Well done 5 stars

But I have a feeling we haven’t heard the end of Erin or her brother. Can’t wait for the next chapter to see whether he filled in his sister in one can only hope.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The characters are so fake it was hard to even get through this first chapter.

Thanks, but no thanks.