All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 01'

Damn This is one hot story and I cant wait to see how slutty Georgie becomes once she learns the pleasure to be had with big hard cocks to service and the joy of cumming while being fucked by one with even touching her own,,,HURRY IM HORNY FOR MORE

loved the story cant wait to read more of georgie's adventurers

Let's see...aside from predictable, dull action, and an over-the-top plot, the best you could come with for a new name is "Georgia Suxcock?" Oh, how clever! Bet that took a lot of deliberation. The only thing that "sux" here is the story. A good reminder about "farms" that when you tramp through the barnyard you gotta watch where you step.

Thanks for the ratings and comments!

Predictable? Dull? Hm. Well to be fair, all porn is predictable - it's the degree of predictability that counts. My pornography is pure fantasy - and fantasies differ from one person to the next! I wanted to create something adult-themed with the simplistic plot of a comic book - over the top and brash. My focus here is on Robert, and how he develops over time.

Stay tuned for more! Chapter 2 will be out in a couple of weeks!

Thanks x

I can't believe there is criticism of this story, it's free and there aren't enough stories on the web. Don't lets put off authors who give these stories to us.

I loved it, I love these kind of stories and I for one can't wait for the next chapter.

Emma

I loved it, I love this type of story and I can't wait for the next chapter. And, there's no need for any bad criticism, the writing is good, and I can see already that the story line has the potential to fan out into many different options / directions. Please write more as soon as you can!! xo pam

Loved your writting and character development. I would like things to slow down, just a little. So much has happened, it is getting a little rushed (for my taste), and I too don't care for the name. To me it doesn't match the story line. This is obviously a very expensive and exclusive facility, and they have invested over 100k in this creature, but the name seems to be more of a name that a teenage boy would give to a cheap porn star. Anyway, just a personal preference. Please continue the story soon.

I enjoyed it, but it is a bit short. I look forward to a chapter two.

Kisses,

Heather

It's been a while since I posted this, but today I submitted the next chapter so hopefully the admins will have it up in a few days!

Enjoy xo