All Comments on 'The Fate of Terra Ch. 07'

This is a brilliant story - I check for updates everyday! One of the best stories on here!

Love it so far, i check daily for the next part, i see great potential for a very long storyline so i hope you dont plan to cut it short or stop it anytime soon

More more more I need more.

Sounds like one man and his AI against the universe!

enrgy transfer wirelessly isnt scifi. tesla did it years ago. other than that, great story!

The story's become absurdly ridiculous, but its still enjoyable nontheless.

This story just jumped from high school to the restaurant at the end of the universe. Awesome story nonetheless

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As it goes along. It is easy to follow has human interest, is somewhat Techy and not too awful violent. I'd sure like to get some of those Nanites LOL!

Looks like shit's about to get serious!

After going to extraordinary lengths to protect his identity as 'Fate', and with the seriousness of the potential consequences, it is ridiculous that Michael trusts Rin and Aki with those secrets so quickly. Even if the nanites make him and Kat almost unkillable it still doesn't make sense.

There's a serious flaw in Michael's identity protection system, as demonstrated by the fact that Takeshi realized that Michael was probably 'Fate'.

It's basically the same as the myth about identifying vampires by their lack of a reflection. Attempting to find out who Michael was should have come up with an identity, even if it was a fake identity, otherwise it flags him as unusually special.