All Comments on 'The Fated Storm'

That was sweet.You're an excellent writer.Happy to see you back.Keep them coming

Great build up, great anticipation, but to me the ending was rushed? If the sex part had been done in the same way as the build up it would have been fantastic

Looking forward to my next snow storm

Can I just say that I am SO excited that you've started writing again. I discovered your stories about a year ago and have read each one numerous times! Another excellent edition to your collection! PLEASE keep them coming :)

you are one of my favorite authors. I am so happy you are writing again. I wish this story was a little longer. is there another part? it did feel rushed at the end.

again, glad to have you and your stories back. you are a very gifted writer.

This is one of the best stories I have read on here. Please keep them cumming opps coming that is lol

You've done it again! Loved every word & already waiting for your next story!

xx

I enjoy your stories and the way you bring your characters to life, also your writing technique is really incredible. The only thing I find about your stories is that you use the same character descriptions each time, it's gorgeous, but I like it when people shake it up

im not sure if im more excited that justin timberlake is finally making a comeback or that you've started writing again... yup, definitely that you've made an epic return to writing the best shit ever.

Another great story from you hope you write more soon

Hell yea , this was totally awesome . More ?

Too hot, too quick

I could blame my mouse-but I am clearly not as dexterous as I would like to be!

I meant o select all the stars, thanks for the story

Just what I wanted...intense passion! Please continue this story!

Mmm, that was fucking sexy.

Full of cliches but hot, sweet and sexy!

Lv this story... Wish you well ...

That's such a shame!!!! Just two pages for this wonderful start of a tale to tell? ....... Fabulous

Great sex :)