All Comments on 'The Females of Wadi Ya Noh.'

Reading this was a waste of time.

We all know life isn't 'fair,' but when it's 11 pages of ridiculous situations and extreme injustice, and you fail to provide some sort of revenge or compensation to the aggrieved, it feels like you created all that build-up with no release or climactic event.

Femdom and humiliation is one thing- and I found those parts to be hot. However, you decided to create a full-blown story and not just something to get people's rocks off. Therefore, unless you take care of the main character and provide some punishment for those who actually deserve it, you're just going to piss a lot of people off.

Thank you for your comment, and I am glad there were some parts of the story that you enjoyed.

I can only assume though, that you didn't notice my line at the bottom of page 11 (The Females of Wadi Ya Noh continues - and concludes, in Part 2) if you feel I have built up the story only to have no real climax, as such, just a bit of a very disappointing dead-end.

But I submitted this story to Literotica as - 'The Females of Wadi Ya Noh. Part 1 (of 2). Unfortunately, they have not put that at the top of the page to advise readers of a 2nd Part. I'll contact Literotica about that, and ask them to rectify it.

I'll advise readers here though, that there are more ridiculous situations to come, in Part 2. It's sort of the point ...

Just to let readers know, the 2nd (and concluding) Part of this story is now posted. Find it here, at:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-females-of-wadi-ya-noh-ch-02

Normally I'm not a fan of F/m stories (I prefer lezdom themes myself),

but I enjoyed this one a lot - maybe cause I'm a sucker for feet and dirty ones at that too hehe.

The only thing that bothered me a bit was the often repetition.

Some lines just seemed like copied and pasted throughout the story.

I did enjoy the fact that you made each and every woman' experience the "ritual",

but maybe if you had put a bit more detail and made the encounters a bit more unique instead of "copy/pasted" the story could have been way better.

I still liked it and I consider it a 4/5!

Best regards.

P.S.

I hope you that will keep on writing!

Consider that F/f for me haha.

Cheers!

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-a random guy

I just read your comments, and I wanted to let you know that I greatly appreciate your feedback.