All Comments on 'The Feminist Professor Pt. 01'

by Ayegeeale

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nothing happened

Was no action at all . Maybe a pg rating at best

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good stable start.

Looking forward to further chapters, slow starts are fine.

grriz1grriz1over 6 years ago
Good Start.

I hope you don't wait too long before bringing out the next addition. This was a good start in setting up what might be coming next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good start

Agree that slow starts are fine as long as the payoff is there later.

If I may, maybe tone down the reverence. She's hot - you conveyed that. Unless you're shifting into supernatural or sci-fi, lower the level just a tad on his verbal adoration.

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