by Ayegeeale
Looking forward to further chapters, slow starts are fine.
I hope you don't wait too long before bringing out the next addition. This was a good start in setting up what might be coming next.
Agree that slow starts are fine as long as the payoff is there later.
If I may, maybe tone down the reverence. She's hot - you conveyed that. Unless you're shifting into supernatural or sci-fi, lower the level just a tad on his verbal adoration.