All Comments on 'The Festival Ch. 03 - Conclusion'

That was AWESOME!!! But sad...nice job!

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one of the best i ve read here in a while.

Erotic and gripping. The pregnancy caught me off guard lol. I like how they struggled and then gave in to their desires. I went to hit 5 stars but accedntly hit 4. Good series

Love it, and I'm not usually into science fiction. One nitpick. In this and many other of your stories, you use "your" when you really mean "you're," the contraction of "you are." It's like a continuing distraction, and I hope you'll find an editor on when to use it. But do keep on writing.

Mr’s is spelled Mrs