All Comments on 'The Feud Ch. 02'

Yet another interesting tale which quite frankly kept me glued to my monitor until the end. xP I'm anxious to know what happens afterwards, in the death match, assuming you add more chapters in the coming future. Once again, this was very well done.

Loved it, though I would suggest drawing the plot out a bit more like in chapter 1. It adds to the suspense and anticipation of the whole story.

I didn't read all of this, since I had to go.

Stupid parents.

Anyways, you need to make MORE chapters.

I have a strong feeling that you are trying to build up sympathy for both sides, and that's very clever writing.

"Anyways, you need to make MORE chapters."

I wish you luck in life, friend. Perhaps you should consider writing professionally, not only as a hobby.