by LaceyDresser
This is the second of your stories I have read I'm liking your style , it's not coarse , I personally like a more physical discrption of the women but the story flows nicely . The arse gape is different too . Well done
Wonderful story and I agree that Deb sure wanted to be the pivot point of the “Fifth Wheel”. Thank You!
Hi Lacey, I've read several of your stories over the last few days and I enjoyed them, but I kept feeling there was something I was missing. I don't think it was anything to do with your work, because the writing is good, and the story moves right along and the characters are fairly well developed. But there was something in my head that couldn't make the connection. Oh well, it's not a perfect world and my head is anything but.
The only "fault" I found, and it certainly isn't your problem, its all mine. I have never liked it when people refer to themselves as "yours truly" but that's me so don't change it on my account. It didn't stop me from enjoying your stories and it certainly shouldn't stop you from using it.
Keep up the good work.
Ted
I tried to send this as a user but I have a terrible time with user name and password business, so here is my user address (if you take a notion to use it) pooky12349@yahoo.com
Just love your imagination. Have enjoyed a number of your stories!