All Comments on 'The Final Domino'

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CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 8 years ago
that's so not cool:

i've didn't read thee entire part1 thus far ..... i'll read everything when

i'm able MATTER FACT i'll read entire story when able ... ... ... ... as far

this story the sequel didn't read everything yet about1/2readabout .....

i've did skim over the remains does include closer sequence [ 1. ]

i'm extremely highly depressed that you did none my ideas that you

did none my options that you did none my storylines

HOWWWWEVERRRRRRRR still excellent still fantastic still sensational

still awesome still magnificent still phenomenal " 2. " BUTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

what's the dealing about the ending like done ..... this had tons ways

spanning out playing out

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 8 years ago
i've now:

did read the remains the sequel this story ... ...

i've do standby everything i've said other message other post this story

- i'll read the part1 from start going finish when able can't now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Favorite author

You are my favorite author on Literotica. Please update this story, and the one about Roland and Carrie Ann.

tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
NO MATTER WHAT THE PATTERN

falling dominoes indicate a tragedy as it is falling over and down, TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317almost 6 years ago
EXACTLY LIKE THE STRAW AND CAMELS

the end result is the same, TK U MLJ LV NV

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