All Comments on 'The First'

by Pilgrim

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Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaover 16 years ago
Not really very erotic...

rather, grim and clinical. At that it was a pretty realistic depiction of how emotionless some male-male encounters can be. I've been there. Best, Ken

Redbird1376Redbird1376over 16 years ago
I liked it

There was no build up, no tension; which is usually what I like most in these types of stories, but it really did the trick for me. Especially the 2 paragraphs about licking/sucking on his ball sack. That will almost always put me over the top.

Overall, the story seemed very realistic. Good work! Hope to see more!

~Redbird1376

cutandhornycutandhornyover 16 years ago
Good story

This story built to a climax in a realistic, straightforward manner. I liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I liked it

I like the way you captured the feeling of a hard cock spewing cum in your ass. It truly is a wonderful feeling!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story

Very similar to my first time. This story makes me want to cheat on my wife agin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Talk about a good hot fuck.

Could easily drive any straight guy to give head and give up his tight asshole for hot sex like that. Like to have my ass filled with a hot cock like that, if I was going to have a man stick his cock in my mouth and butt-fuck me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow

One the best m2m casual sex stories I've read here. 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
so hot...

That description was such a turn on. Got me so hard I need a cock in me taking my tight virgin arse.

philnance70philnance70over 10 years ago
Nice surprise

I loved the hole story. I only expected a good blow job story...but then when he fucked his ass....that was awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please let this happen to me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What a great description of the sex. had me hard and cumming quickly.

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