All Comments on 'The First Evil Ch. 09'

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AvatarIkaAvatarIkaalmost 9 years ago
Strange story

I'm having a great deal of trouble following the story line. It may make sense to the author but not to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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Well, a month and a half later, lemme see if I can help you out:

Rory is a vampire with an asterisk. I guess vampires can reproduce but their offspring are human? But then she also got turned, when she was young. I guess there's some sort of blood list thing when you mature. Which she fought off. So she's special. Died because she didn't turn into a vampire and her body couldn't handle it.

Some demigod/actual God/concentrated force for goodness decided to make her his earthly avatar or some such. She can pretty much will things to happen. So crazy witch lady sent an army of wolves at her, she beat up the witch lady, will powered her house back to normalcy, and is now going to bolt with her lesbian amigos while she tries to figure out her powers.

Oh, and her buddies are Romulus and Remus, the founders of Ancient Rome who were raised by wolves.

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