All Comments on 'The First Little Steps'

This chapter was way too short for what little progress was made with the plot. When you finally have him horse fucking her, as part of her effort to correct her lack of a wild and exciting youth, you should expect your readers to switch dramatically, from the literary to the semi-literate. You'll be able to tell by how the comments change.

A 5 minute read is not.

I liked it. Why no updates since feb 2016? Don’t be discouraged by negative comments.