All Comments on 'The First Night'

An older women close by can give you the training and discipline you need.

well done, lovely job. 5*

Jane marwood

Really enjoyed!

As a woman reader I have to say, you write the best stories here; they're never seedy or crude, which I appreciate, given that a male being psychologically dominated by a woman feels much more exciting than gratuitous physical violence; you never degrade women in order to be submissive yourself, and you have a knack for choosing the most erotic, refined language for sex, rather than porn-esque dogrel. I enjoy you, and the passage in this where she makes love to him, and the words he chooses in that moment, are especially well done.

Thank you all for your kind comments. I hope each submission (no pun intended) improves upon the last.

I am at the moment trying to pen some longer stories, and experimenting with new scenes and ideas.

As for the comment 'very revealing story'. Close by you say? Well then, don't be shy!

I commented on this one anonymously a while back, but reading it again I just wanted to say how lovely it still feels to revisit. It's very nearly perfect, one of my favorites of yours and a huge turn on. Well done little one.

Lovely story, sensual and romantic dominance, what could be better.