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by Sarawringer
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Anonymousover 9 years agoBrilliant writing.
Great beginning can't wait to read more. I hope she's pregnant by the time she leaves.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoSo ... finish it!!!
A great start, but you need to finish the story. We should find out if he gets her pregnant! Maybe gets to suckle on her filled breasts!
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