All Comments on 'The First SaR Mission Ch. 05'

I am really enjoying your story, the details you are giving are great thanks so much for sharing it with us. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Very adept description of a search. Love the cats.

Really enjoying this story, the authors previous comments about writing from a narrators pov is totally justified, writing in the first person is far more immersive, “Death on a stick” indeed.