All Comments on 'The First SaR Mission Ch. 07'

For dropping the flags. Much easier to read now. Interesting details about how to manage in such extreme conditions. Fascinating.

I have only, one problem: excessive use of, commas.

This is really an excellent werewolf story with a different twist to it. It is very well written with an excellent plot and excellent character development. Also your description of rescue technices is very good and realistic. I am waiting for your next chapter to see if the injuried are turned to save their lives and Anna requests to be changed to be with her family. Great story, please finish it. Retired Army NCO

Just one request. Turn them.

I have been a volunteer emt/firefighter for over 15 years and having seen what burns like that can do, I have to admit I had a few tears iny eyes. I hope they save her the complete way, or just let her go peacefully.

Great story, with gripping, realistic drama and a very real sense of jeopardy mixed in. I’m pretty sure I know how this’ll pan out, so fingers crossed no lives are lost, especially little girl, because let’s be honest, children carry 95% of the innocence in this world of ours, probably in the Werewolf world too I’d guess.