All Comments on 'The First SaR Mission Ch. 08'

I am a casual reader not a grammarian, but I had no problem with the punctuation and readability of this story. Thanks.

Still enjoying the story. I can be flexible on punctuation. FYI, furry is lots of fur, fury is extreme anger.

Great chapter PN ! Let your wife that we appreciate the Flaming Red Pen but to go easier on you. Please ? It is hard enough to write this Great story . I love wolf stories an this one is wonderful . This one and Partwolf's Dominant Species are my current reading list . 5*s too !

Thanks for the read

tx cracker

Doesn't really feel like the story is moving. Basically, we're still in the same spot we were last chapter.

A very well written story with an a very different plot from other werewolf stories. I would like to know if you do this kind of work or knows someone who does? Because you appear very knowledgable about how a S & R would play out. I love the story and have given each chapter 5-STARS. I hope you continue writing after you finish this story as you are an excellent writer who knows how to tell a story with a good plot and excellent character development. Re+++++FBFEtired Army NCO