All Comments on 'The First Step Into Darkness'

Mmm. Your a sick slutt letting those nasty strangers touch you! #unbelieveable.

Hi Neha,

This was better than the last one. the buildup is great and the feelings of a teenage girl who enjoys the sensations even if she knows that it is not right is described very nicely

Aakash

Hi neha it is good story you need to write more. i liked the panty part bcoz i lov ladies used panties.

u can mail me or send me ur feedback on silkpantyslut my id.

if u wish u can send me ur panties too.

Arvind

its a great story building in but trying writing a longer one. u have got the skills to write a good one.

keep writing!! u r too good!

why don' you write it's next part i'm dying for it

Can't wait for the next one

Then you will keep getting One Star rating from me.

The story progression is so very natural. It seems very real.