All Comments on 'The First Time I Noticed Ch. 02'

As long as both are adults I have no problem with incest romance (even same sex).

We have to have more - very HOT sex but now they have to plan on how to keep going when home and what do they do when they are at separate colleges ??? Maybe, he can transfer to her college and rent an apartment together ??? There has to be a way to get together and how do they top what they've started ?? Thanks !!

Please continue.

I really hope to read more soon.

horny2doit - The next chapter is coming soon, with loads more backstory. I promise this one won't take months. Really. :)

I liked the way you brought us along.

Great story

Still a good premise.

But sex still happens too fast. And there's too much sex in too short a time.

Three stars.

Well right about one thing, once you break the taboo of family fucking, you are on dangerous grounds. That was quite a description of their first intercourse, though I was surprised by the amount of time it took him to cum in her once they started. The first time my sister and I fucked we were so hot that we could hardly contain ourselves. So yes his length of time thrusting into her was a wee bit of time before he left his seed in her. And from your description of their fucking, they were wild to be fulfilled. I must admit though it sure sounded good and I want more of this steamy fantasy.

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Ah, sibling love how sweet it is. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.