All Comments on 'The First Time I Noticed Ch. 05'

I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to the next chapter

Love this story so far, like thats its just between the siblings and hoping for a happy ending and they stay together

Wow was that a read, great length with great depth. I just can't get enough of those tow and how incredibly sweet that are, made for each other doesn't even cover it all. Those moments when they get lost in thought just by looking at each other makes my heart melt, and all those witty lines spoken in just the right moment give them a whole new personality aspect. The shopping trip experience had me on the edge but they did pull through, though I now expect to see a proper date in the future to balance it all out.

I'm kinda sad to see that only 2 chapter remain in this story but I also hope to see the perfect happy ending where they end up together forever, or maybe a new series that depicts their lives after the summer break and how they do live together on their own and fend of new challenges in life. Either way I really look forward to the next instalment in the series.

5* and thanks for making my day so much more awesome!

One would be to defer an admissions, there are also admissions to community colleges, internships and just "taking a semester off". Perhaps stay home for one more semester and both get into schools in the same area and parents wouldn't worry about their kids not having someone to support them...or....parents wouldn't mind or even be in on it...same with potential relatives in the area.

The more you write, the more depth you give to your characters, the more I like it.

This story just melts my heart. To have such a love and bond with someone would be amazing. Can't wait for more. I have really enjoyed it thanks.

I did not rate or comment on the first four chapters as I couldn't take the time, rushing from one to the next, but have now given 5 stars and would give more if possible. I'm sorry to see that it will end in two more chapters but have added it to my favorites and you to my list of go to authors. Thank you for your time and effort, it was well spent

I love this story and am very much invested in reading it to the end. Their bond is strong AND adorable. Some bonds are so intense and sexy that they miss a certain quality...sweetness. Your story captures sweetness despite the taboo nature of it. Well done!

I wish I'd known what I was getting in to when I clicked on the first chapter of this story. This is fucking fantastic, and every single installment is getting five stars from me.

I have been enjoying your opus immensely but have yet to leave a comment. But I simply had to after reading the final two pages of this chapter. Your writing is lyrical in its beauty. These pages are among finest and most inspired that I have read on this site.

But no butt secks!

Just fabulous.

Not a bad story but, the he said she said in every quote nearly drove me nuts. I gave it a 3 but it would have been a 5 except for the incessant he said she said in every quote. The author needs to use them much more sparingly. When the quote identifies the speaker there is no need to add he said or she said. MM