All Comments on 'The Flash Pt. 02'

Its awesome dude! Great writing hope you contiNue it

I like how you are copying the show and adding sex scenes, but I think it would be better with less emphasis on telling what happens in the show and more of a focus on the sex the characters have.

Good series beginning but kinda of slow. To much repeating of the show, but still pretty good

This was great!!....especially the part with caitlin......please try to continue this story

I started watching both 'Flash' and 'Arrow' with high hopes, but soon lost interest; there was too much talk and introspection for me, as in all the modern hour-long episodes. I like the sex, but wading through the rest is a chore - let's have some PWP!

This is great I love the sex when are you writing another chapter please be soon of both the arrow and flash ones

Love you work

Oh I forgot that Iris is with Detective Pretty Boy at this time. Poor Barry, as soon as he wakes up, he feels the love of his life's perfect huge boobs with their hug and she's with someone. It's no secret that Barry wanted to ask Iris out when he woke up in the show, this version of events makes it worse for him. (I wonder how many times Iris

unintentionally gave Barry a feel of her big boobs when they were growing up. Barry must've had LONG showers. Oh man.)

Love this chapter and this story. Where's the next chapter?