All Comments on 'The Floating World Pt. 02'

This was an intense sexual pleasurable read thanks so much I deeply enjoyed

I liked part two very much. I adore stories that include men with men. Men like to read about, and watch, women together, don't they? I like to read about, and watch, men together. I can tell from your writing how much you love women - the way they look and taste and smell and walk and sit and kiss. I feel like that about some men - and some women.

in the anthology A Floating World - Urban Erotica, or the print version, Amanda in the City.

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You have experience. Written as if you were looking over my shoulder so many years ago.

This is so hot and always briliiantly written, thank you. And I love the way you capture what is good about both "old wood" and "saplings." There is a place for both and this story really offers a way for acceptance and enjoyment of those roles - a yearning for human beings to accept and share in the way these three do. I also really appreciate that you let the heat between the two men be so real, even if brief.

And I resonate with the comment from 5 years ago about enjoying watching and witnessing two men together.

This wonderful author never fails to amaze me with his characters and sexual descriptions. I have only read page one, is that not the best, most erotic blow job, not only on literotica, but in any story anywhere. I had to stop I needed my own release. But I will finish it in the way Adam ( What a lover) makes love, slow and sensual.

Oh my god! Did I get a surprise, my all time fantasy, one I never expect to fullfil ,two bi men having beautiful sex before DP. me. This story encapsulates it beautifully, this must be the best writer of erotic fiction anywhere. I have never been aroused by two men making love, However with this story I was so wet, I couldn't keep my fingers away from my clit. and they hadn't even touched the beautiful Amanda. I fall in love with all his characters. He brought it to a beautiful conclusion, what a lovely ending. It was perfectly written from the first word to the last, anyone who does not get highly aroused reading this have no sexual feelings. My own release was just as good as the story. Thank you to Electricblue