All Comments on 'The Floor wasn't the Only Thing Laid'

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AxelottoAxelottoover 6 years ago
the fist 5 paragraphs just made me want to shut the door

but she finally shut up and it was okay after that.

Seriously, though, that was too much characterization in the beginning for what was otherwise a stroke story. Or maybe just too much of THAT character.

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