All Comments on 'The Flowering'

You did a wonderful job with this story. It was very well written. The descriptions were great and the story unfolded perfectly. I hope to see more submissions from you. Keep up the great work.

This was a really beautiful story. I loved your depth of characters and the innocence of the girl.

Wow. I guess I'm speechless after reading this one.

I really enjoyed this. Very erotic and arousing. The ending sets it up nicely for a sequel and I hope you'll be writing one.

Tarakin...I liked this. And I agree. A sequel is in order!!

slope of confusion and indecission. Sounds like a young girl trying to figure out the difference between love and lust and losing the battle.

Very well written. Please write a sequel. It was very erotic and arousing.

Really liked this story although the last paragraph about the wedding was a little unexpected.

Unexpected and moisture inducing.

This needs a sequel for sure.

I like it! :) I agree about the sequel.. :)