All Comments on 'The Fool Ch. 12'

That was an excellent and satisfying conclusion to a great story. Thank you. I look forward to your next creation.

The ending was the best! I loved this whole story. It was super amazing. Yay!

Thank you for taking the time and patience to entertain us.

I feel like I write the same thing at the conclusion of each of your stories but it is true in every case. You are certainly a very talented writer and I appreciate the work you put into making this and each of your stories so enjoyable. Thank you.

Theakston

I'm sorry for your dislike of this story for a couple of my flaws in judgement when reviewing and editing this for her. The author trusted me implicitly, so blame me if you have a problem with it. After further review I just can't see how that alone should affect how you read the story, but that is your prerogative.

I really enjoyed it. Wish there were more significant consequences for Jordan but it's unfortunately realistic that the guy takes credit for the woman's success and is well rewarded despite being an abusive sleeze.

Thoroughly enjoyed this entire story. Not what I expected, and it kept getting better and more intriguing. Well done.

This is an amazing story. I loved all the twists and turns. Great work!

Everything about it was great. Thanks for sharing.

What a great series. I eagerly awaited each part. Can't wait for your follow up

Ellie - Such an amazing story, I've been off Lit for a while and was delighted to find the entire series. The binge is over though now. I kept thinking this could be a screenplay. Please consider a sequel!

Amazing story! I couldn't stop reading it all in one go, meaning I slept the next morning! I really wish this would become a movie, if not a tv show. I also, loved the fact that Sinclair was sweet, loving and at the same time had a kinky dominant side! Keep on writing, as anything that I read written by you is, well, amazing!

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I want to hand over my money for a first edition. Don’t care what story you publish - just publish. Anything you have written or will write is a perfect antidote for that god awful Grey BS.

Heart felt thanks to you as usual.

I am so addicted to this!!! Keep up the amazingly good writing!!

Amazing story. I suppose you tookt he character names form the black sails tv series. Brilliantly written

Thank you ellie! I greatly enjoyed this story.

I’m sad that this story came to an end. Please write a follow up series!

Thank you, Ellie, for sharing your work.

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I echo @mugsymalone... word for word!

Mind blowing !!

an amazing plot, incredible detail in characters. They feel like family :)

Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading it !