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BiceptualBiceptualover 7 years ago

Very imaginative. I hope there's more!

DRGRIFFINDRGRIFFINover 7 years ago
Excellent Start

This is an incredibly good start on what could easily be an intense multi chapter saga. Please continue. I eagerly await the next chapter.

sarah_siddonssarah_siddonsover 7 years ago
No! you cannot leave it here

More...more...more. I don't normally read this type of story but this ones got me wanting more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

...bnut yeah, what Sarah said!

John

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Wow

This is good scifi, and sexy, too.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...